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Blue Passion by Yennineii Blue Passion by Yennineii
you don't have to read from here...This piece is very important one. Why? I probably won't continue music school. I drew this piece for my piano teacher, to give it to her after my last exam and thank for all those 9 years. ; v ; *sob*

to here ' v '
I decided to draw this piece giving my full and best and request Critiques. I think that thanks to them, I'll be able to see more mistakes -I'm counting on you! ; u ;


Thanks, Hope you like it!
Done in SAI, texture from pixiv~
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I really love the cool colors. The arrangement of the character, piano, and roses is well done. I'm curious to if the character is seated, if the skirt of the dress isn't hooped than it should be scrunched between her and the seat, but I really like it anyway because it looks natural. The coloring technique is simple and it suits the picture. The anatomy of the character is decent and the placement of the watermark almost seems like it is part of the picture. I feel like there are a few too many flowers and bubbles floating around though.
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The thing that gets me most about this image is that you don't even have to read your artists comments to feel it has some important meaning. When I saw this in my inbox, even as a thumbnail I could feel quite an intense vibe from it.

I like the story within the picture, the feeling of bliss whilst the girl plays alone and how the roses have fully bloomed indicating you've reached your goal. The girls delicate features, contrasting hair and the piano are amazing.

A suggestion or two I'd have to make a few things flow better would be:

Try warping the roses more so that they aren't all facing front on. This will help cover up the fact that some are the same and hopefully give more depth to the scene. Even if they were glued to the wall, the wouldn't all hang the same.

The other thing I noticed was the squares in the background. I love their texture, but the perspective is kind of lost a bit as the squares on the floor don't come towards the viewer.

Those were about the only things I could find to suggest. I also thought maybe there should be more reflection under the piano, since there is under the dress, But all in all, I think this is a beautiful piece that goes well with the title you've given it and I like the intense emotion that it provokes.
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Pokespecshipper Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
:)

You will play again one day".. I know it
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yamyam101 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
ddddaaaaannnnneee, this is really good. 
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dulcekarencita Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
the color, the background all girl is beautiful!
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Thebest88 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Wow, beautiful!
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sugarkittens Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
I play the piano too!! though used to do tests too but now I just learn the piano from my piano teacher. I just didn't want to take the tests because I had too much homework when I entered middle school, making no time for theory... and I didn't see the point if it wasn't fun.
-Minly
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IMBLUEDABEDEEDABEDIE Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i like it
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DayoAprare Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just... <3'd it
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nataszek Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug: oh 9 lat to dużo, skoro to jest Twoja i tylko Twoja de cyzja to to jest najważniejsze :) zawsze będziesz mogła usiąść do fortepianu i znów coś zagrać. to takie wspaniałe u mieć na czymś grać. a praca jest piękna. przyciąga wzrok, jest świetlista i optymistyczna :)
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Shelly143 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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AnangLee Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG this is beautiful keep doing great work! :D
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