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Blue Passion by Yennineii Blue Passion by Yennineii
you don't have to read from here...This piece is very important one. Why? I probably won't continue music school. I drew this piece for my piano teacher, to give it to her after my last exam and thank for all those 9 years. ; v ; *sob*

to here ' v '
I decided to draw this piece giving my full and best and request Critiques. I think that thanks to them, I'll be able to see more mistakes -I'm counting on you! ; u ;


Thanks, Hope you like it!
Done in SAI, texture from pixiv~
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I really love the cool colors. The arrangement of the character, piano, and roses is well done. I'm curious to if the character is seated, if the skirt of the dress isn't hooped than it should be scrunched between her and the seat, but I really like it anyway because it looks natural. The coloring technique is simple and it suits the picture. The anatomy of the character is decent and the placement of the watermark almost seems like it is part of the picture. I feel like there are a few too many flowers and bubbles floating around though.
What do you think?
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34 out of 44 deviants thought this was fair.

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The thing that gets me most about this image is that you don't even have to read your artists comments to feel it has some important meaning. When I saw this in my inbox, even as a thumbnail I could feel quite an intense vibe from it.

I like the story within the picture, the feeling of bliss whilst the girl plays alone and how the roses have fully bloomed indicating you've reached your goal. The girls delicate features, contrasting hair and the piano are amazing.

A suggestion or two I'd have to make a few things flow better would be:

Try warping the roses more so that they aren't all facing front on. This will help cover up the fact that some are the same and hopefully give more depth to the scene. Even if they were glued to the wall, the wouldn't all hang the same.

The other thing I noticed was the squares in the background. I love their texture, but the perspective is kind of lost a bit as the squares on the floor don't come towards the viewer.

Those were about the only things I could find to suggest. I also thought maybe there should be more reflection under the piano, since there is under the dress, But all in all, I think this is a beautiful piece that goes well with the title you've given it and I like the intense emotion that it provokes.
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Pokespecshipper Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
:)

You will play again one day".. I know it
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yamyam101 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
ddddaaaaannnnneee, this is really good. 
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dulcekarencita Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014
the color, the background all girl is beautiful!
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Thebest88 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist
Wow, beautiful!
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sugarkittens Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
I play the piano too!! though used to do tests too but now I just learn the piano from my piano teacher. I just didn't want to take the tests because I had too much homework when I entered middle school, making no time for theory... and I didn't see the point if it wasn't fun.
-Minly
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Odd-Tech-0support0 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
i like it
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DayoAprare Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just... <3'd it
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nataszek Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:hug: oh 9 lat to dużo, skoro to jest Twoja i tylko Twoja de cyzja to to jest najważniejsze :) zawsze będziesz mogła usiąść do fortepianu i znów coś zagrać. to takie wspaniałe u mieć na czymś grać. a praca jest piękna. przyciąga wzrok, jest świetlista i optymistyczna :)
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Shelly143 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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AnangLee Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG this is beautiful keep doing great work! :D
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KawaiiSanny Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
wow soo amazing * w *
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Arbalester Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Szkoda, że takie małe, ustawiłabym sobie na tapetę. *U* Naprawdę podobają mi się te błyszczące efekty *v* Fakt, że róże powinny być trochę bardziej zróżnicowane i te bąbelki też, ale to nic. Pianistka jest prześliczna ;3
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cóż, lenistwo mnie zżarło ;e;
ale i tak dziękuję @u@
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mitsuxdesu Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tak z ciekawości.. Brałaś też lekcje śpiewu?
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nie, nie miałam lekcji śpiewu, a z chóru się zwalniałam i uciekałam XDD"""
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mitsuxdesu Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
JAK MOG%u0141A%u015A. XD Bo g%u0142os to Ty masz cudny!
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BlissfulMelody Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just BEAUTIFUL.
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PinkKrystal01 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
It's so beautiful!
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Augos Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student General Artist
ohh very nice
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KatieKissnGiggles Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's absolutely beautiful I'm not a fan of the color blue but this pic really drew me in it's sad to leave one talent behind for another but it's not easy to focus on 2 or more as long as this is what you want to do everything is fine it was nice of you to draw this for your teacher I really love myself you are really good keep up the great work
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yui-tohma Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Świetna robota. Mi się bardzo podoba <3
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję Q^Q
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Katsumii Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Awesomeeee!!! *v* She's lovely~ Everything is!! :heart:
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MewMewo Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist
If ya gonna learn japanese, i suggest, that if you have an android-phone, you can get a lot of free
learn-katakana-hiragana-kanji-apps. I'm trying a lot of them too :)
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DarkMaiden13 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012
i dont usually give a crap about "depth"- i mean good art reaches people even when the message isnt clear. but as a fellow musician i really like this piece. ive always wished that i had learned to play piano or violoin when i was little
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Nichigin Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow that's fantastic!!! I wish I listened what is she playing... :D
I'm sure that it would be fantastic!
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yinwa333 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this is so fucking pretty, for me it passes 5 stars <3
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kakashilover11 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Student General Artist
i like the background and her dress ><
i like the flower too
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SirMimsyPompingdon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
That's so cool and vibrant^^
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locodela Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely! wonderful choice of colors!
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Kumiko15 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Filmographer
It looks beautiful! Great job with all the details! ♥ ^^
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yuuike Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg this is sooo pretty~*Q*

love the use of colors :iconrlytearplz:
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momopu Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jestem z Ciebie taka dumna, ten art jest taki wspaniały. A co do muzyki to troche szkoda bo ostatnio Ci świetnie idzie muzyką jak sama pisałas no ale nie ma co się zmuszać jesli nie czujesz że to to co chcesz kiedyś robić ;A;
a co do japońca to weź chodź do Histu ze mną. Byś od portu jeździła już ze mną a potem do portu bym cię odwoziła i w ogóle ;A; <3
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Za dużo kasy na tramwaje ;____;
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momopu Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
umrzyj @____@
WEJDŹ NA MEILA ~~
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Weszłam, ściągnęłam pliki~
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momopu Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me gusta kapusta~~
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Chiiteru Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Oh wow, absolutely beautiful :'D <3
I love the whole emotion this picture brings <3
Its so touching.... <3

And, oh *u* You've played for 9 years!? ;A;
Wooow <33 //admires
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my, thank you so much *cries* ;_____;
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i-clockworks Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Wow, I feel exactly the same way about piano and music XD
Piano exams just seem to kill the fun and enjoyment of playing ==" (in my opinion)
This image really caught my attention too :D I love it :)
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AbbeyLBM Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i just love it!
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Joakaha Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful work! ^.^
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NAnoo99 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012
kawaiiii keeeeep it up
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Gonio Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wiem co jak to jest być związanym z nauczycielem pianina... chociaż u mnie to było tylko 6 lat, ale i tak myślę, że mniej więcej Cię rozumiem. To cudowne, że narysowałaś coś tak pięknego. Świetny sposób na zakończenie pewnego rozdziału w życiu. Na pewno się mu/jej spodoba :>
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Ingrid459 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Absolutely stunning! :heart:
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monokuro96 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
Boże, zapiera dech ;; nie mogę się napatrzeć o-o
Nauczycielka na pewno się ucieszy z rysunku, jest naprawdę cudowny *^* T-tak w ogóle, to 9 lat.. Jesteś niesamowita 'A'
learn japanese? ohoho, jak coś, służę pomocą~!
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XxNightstarxX Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
Oh my. This is absolutely beautiful! I love it! :heart:
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Lileath Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Artist
Piękne! Śliczne kolory i w ogóle wszystko~ Chyba Twoja najlepsza(mym skromnym zdaniem) jak dotąd praca!

PS. Nie odchodź ._. Wszyscy mnie zostawiają. Chyba się popłaczę!
... i btw bardzo fajny pomysł z daniem tego swojej pani!
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Yennineii Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dziękuję ;vv;

To chyba ja się zaraz popłaczę, że odchodzę ;_; wszyscy wrzucają na tą szkołę, a ja ją kocham asdafsafg
...mam nadzieję, że jej się spodoba XDDD
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Lileath Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Artist
NIE ODCHODŹ ;________;
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